In the recent years, it has been observed that, playing any sport is essential for many things. Sports are of two types Indoor sports and outdoor sports. By playing sports one can rejuvenate to work or study, also by playing outdoor sports one can become healthy. To get success in sport some people consider that you should have natural ability while other thinks that it is the matter of practice and hard work. Here we will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of their views and will make conclusion in the end.
Natural ability can lead to success provided one should do hard work to learn the techniques. If one is having natural quality in some sports, he can catch the train easily. For instance, to play chess one should have good intelligence quotient, while in case of swimming one should have very good stamina to keep his breath for a long time and energy. Having such type of natural quality gives added advantages than others.
On the other hand, one who do hard work and practice, they will defiantly achieve the success. If one is being toil, then definitely he will get success. I personally experienced this, when I was in college, I was not able to play chess but when I worked a lot and endeavored practice and thereafter, I became successful in it.
Considering above pros and cons of different views of people, I can conclude that, those who do practice and hard work has high chances of getting success compared to other who is having natural ability.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, while, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70384615385 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38789786486 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0682539681 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0769230769 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304173956448 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114501851741 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100501842535 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181740751793 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771105250741 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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