You are organising an executive event for the company you work for. Write a letter to the person in charge of a venue that you are considering for the event and ask for detailed information regarding dates, services and costs.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to enquire about the Seminar hall that I have booked for the meeting on 27 September at your specified site.
At first, I need to verify that it is an official business executives seminar and will be held next month for two days from 27 September to 28 September. Besides, in these two days, the officials should be welcomed diligently with upmost cares well as supply of soft drinks and snacks consecutively, in the beginning of seminar to keep them dehydrated.
Furthermore, the sitting arrangement should be for more than 100 people. The availability of stationary and in between help should be assisted by a separate person. Moreover, the facilities such as high sound proof microphones and speakers, large screen visual display projector and other technical assistance should be on the top criteria.
Moving further, timing of the seminar will be between 10:00 a.m to 6:00 p.m. Basically, there should not be any compromise in the hygienic food. Company does not want to any gaveling issues about food and health. I have agreed to 200$ per day for the booking as has already placed a cheque. Further any discussions of expenses to be covered partially by both the parties.
Yours faithfully,
jasmeen.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am writing this letter to enquire about the Seminar hall that I have booke...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'executives'' or 'executive's'?
Suggestion: executives'; executive's
... verify that it is an official business executives seminar and will be held next month for...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 283, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arge screen visual display projector and other technical assistance should be on ...
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Line 17, column 231, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...about food and health. I have agreed to 200$ per day for the booking as has already ...
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Line 17, column 274, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...$ per day for the booking as has already placed a cheque. Further any discussions...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06161137441 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7469106002 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.873654518 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0909090909 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11069264562 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437233234066 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491111866752 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744560688357 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275943985953 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.