The picture gives information on how the used glass bottles are recycled.
Overall, it involves three stages and 10 steps, which starts with collection of wasted glass bottles and ends with delivery of newly made bottles fro sale in super markets.
In the first stage, the second-hand bottles are collected at the collection area and then transported to the recycling area. The second stage starts with washing of the collected bottles with high-pressure water to remove dust particles, after which they are sorted according to their colour (brown, green and clear) .
Then they are moved to the glass factory in order to crush the bottles into small pieces. The broken glass pieces are then exposed to heat by burning in furnace at 600 to 800 degree celsius. Next, the recycled molten glass is coupled with new liquid glass and poured into a mould to get the shape of a bottle. The new bottles are then filled with drinks and delivered to markets for sale to the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: FOR_FRO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for'?
Suggestion: for
...nds with delivery of newly made bottles fro sale in super markets. In the first ...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g to their colour brown, green and clear . Then they are moved to the glass fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91017964072 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35963672787 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59880239521 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6644216302 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.875 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.08958846163 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049050294508 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464627632766 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0714551632395 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478610861141 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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