Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.
Grandchildren have been raised with both the assistance of parents and grandparents. Spending time with their grandchildren would be a positive development for grandparents as these old individuals will be pleased to convey their expertise to their beloved ones and they will feel more amused with next to their grandchildren rather than spending time monotonously.
First and foremost, grandparents who did not have time in their working ages for their children, now have a plenty of time to bring up their grandchildren, and it is a great pleasure for them. This is because in their retirement ages, they have abundant time, and with their superior life experience, they can happily advice their daughters or sons which would flourish the grandchildren vigorously. For instance, when a father’s tantrum towards his son due to his low grades is prevented by the grandfather, the young boy’s feelings will not be hurt with his father’s anger, and the grandfather will be happy as he have kept the peace in his son’s family. Consequently, grandparents can feel delighted when they contribute to the development of their grandkids and children.
Apart from feeling blissful, grandparents feel amused when they take care of their grandchildren rather than feeling bored in their retirement days. Considering this, preparing the meal, helping the granddaughter with her homework and taking grandson to his school would be all exciting activities for grandparents rather than watching TV shows or knitting fabric. To illustrate, when a boy and his grandmother play hide and seek, they will probably both have a good time and she will be thrilled to be with her grandson instead of doing regular housework. As a result, grandparents will feel excited when they fill their time with interesting activities with their grandchildren rather than spending time with boredom.
To sum up, it is clear that grandparents have a remarkable role in raising their grandkids. They will be joyful when they share their wisdom to correct their children’s mistakes and they will feel more than happy to spend time with their grandchildren rather than doing monotonous housetasks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 632, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...and the grandfather will be happy as he have kept the peace in his son's family...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, so, apart from, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41449275362 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10349384051 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495652173913 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.7801137069 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.666666667 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.75 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134280822134 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750523962316 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426134557323 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102821968324 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0145488497786 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.69 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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