Grandparents play a big role in bringing up the children. Do you think it is useful for grandparents? Discuss reasons with your opinion and give relevant examples.
In modern society, it is becoming a trend that grandparents are taking place of parents to look after the children in their families. In my own perspective, it is of great importance for the grandparents to do so.
First of all, by staying with the children, grandparents could keep themselves healthy as raising children requires huge effort, In some ways, taking care of children is like having exercises, which makes you feel tired but also healthy. Additionally, elderly people have got to keep alert and active when they are looking after children, thus their brains and minds work more frequently than they are alone. It is helpful for them to stay away from mental disease, such as memory loss.
In addition, the experience of raising grandchildren could bring grandparents plenty of laughter and joy, therefore they are less likely to feel alone and depressed than being alone. For instance, old people who live with themselves are easier to suffer loneliness, since their children are not living with them and they have no one to share their emotions with. When they stay with their grandchildren, they could enjoy a warmer and more enjoyable family life.
Moreover, the time when they bring up their grandchildren would be one of the most memorable moments in their lives. Hence, when they become too old too stay with their children and grandchildren, they have such a wonderful memory to remind. Apart from that, their grandchildren would feel a strong bonding with them when they grow up, because of the love they exerted when they raised them. As a result, the grandchildren would be more willing to look after them whey become too old and unhealthy.
To conclude, the benefits for grandparents to bring up children in their families would be manifold. I believe that every grandparent should at least spend a certain amount of time staying and accompanying their grandchildren.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to stay'?
Suggestion: to stay
... lives. Hence, when they become too old too stay with their children and grandchildren, ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, apart from, at least, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04761904762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74931265603 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530158730159 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4863924295 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169021032299 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777209682219 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611654397337 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128820127672 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475527493605 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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