Why do some people who leave school early are more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Reasons why they are more successful and what is required to be successful?
There are a number of people who dropped their studies early, yet they become successful eventually. In the meantime, some others complete their degrees at school, but they may not be as successful as the former group. There are reasons for this situation an success should be achieved in multiple ways.
First of all, there are some celebrities who foresee the developing trend in the future and devote themselves into those industries. They became successful because they were running in the correct direction. For instance, Bill Gates and Steve Jobs realized that computer science and information technology are the future of the world, thus they left school early, spent enormous time and effort fighting in these realms and they finally became the leader of Microsoft and Apple.
In addition, some people who quitted school early and became successful businessmen, as they have a gift for communicating with others and making new friends. These interpersonal skills are significant to their success and they are not able to be acquired at school.
Except for the insight to work in the right way and social skills, there are two aspects that are crucial towards success, fundamental knowledge and perseverance. Even if those famous people left school earlier than others, they kept learning knowledge from other sources by themselves and they are persisted to their goals all the time. Those two are the key factors to bring you success no matter if you are absent from school or continue with it.
To conclude, leaving school early does not mean success, whereas it could always find reasons for those celebrities to success, even though they did so. Everyone should learn from them and then they could be closer to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, so, then, thus, whereas, except for, for instance, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11578947368 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50752269228 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3267753694 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.153846154 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15384615385 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416344525789 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165112279359 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752973013684 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259010104698 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877883579332 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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