A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculam untill they enter college.
curriculum, by definition is the lay down procedure of thing to know about a particular subject. Some would argue that engaging students to study national curriculum before admitted to school, while other would advocate for it is not necessary to engage and burden students to study. Studying is an all round process that should be encompass in one life for growth in any endeavours, though the advantage of studying national curriculum before entering school is a good vibe to know more about the national issue and be bold of where you come from is not a necessary compared to the burden, time and resources could be channelled into more resourceful activities. after weighing the merits and demerits, i am certain that its not necessary to stress students to study national curriculum before entering college.
Furthermore, studying national curriculum does not academical success or even been patriotic to the nation. Consider, the number of course unit to be undertaken in the college, total of 180 units none of this are centered on the academic syllabus on the enrolled course. The knowledge gained in encumbering students of national issues won't have significant on the overall performance of the student at the end.
From statistics, 80 percent of student who enroll and a mastery of a vocational skills do better in practical aspect of their study during college. while wasting precious time on studying national issues, engaging students in vocational skills give students more variety of job opportunities after schools and thereby increasing employability of graduates.
Has the nation provided platform for that? lots the fund that can be invested in national development would be wasted on teaching students national issues. It will be of good kindness if this funds are invested in education instititutes. The nation should just imbibe nation cirriculum in the studying process and not over-burden students before they enter college.
In conclusion, its clear that student studying national issues before enrolling colleges will be fair, as it's a a time-wasting and does not significance on the overall performance of the student after graduation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31395348837 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89607257229 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.5678767932 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.571428571 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398937835758 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158356788674 0.0831039109588 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111052828929 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240208151876 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596929178475 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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