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Several individuals opine that pupils should be screened, regarding to their talents in their scope. Although, others think what can be the best approach is to have school goers with various talents of study together.I am, personally in favour with the first statement. it can not be refuted, to develop the depth of knowledge, a good curriculum should be adjusted by a pedagog. For applying this, some prerequisites should be provided, by which students will be taught beneficially.this contemporary century, at which students are not seperated, the curricula are not well-determined, to meet the educational needs of all the students, with all of the pace of learning. By virtue of this issue,pupils who have higher developmental readiness will be deprived from the education, which is appropriate for them. Moreover, they will be bored and lose their interest during the time. In fact,if intelligent students have been split from others, they would have been taught efficiently, by which they could have better job prospect, thus it should be asserted, they can be stimulated by this method to compete with others by which they will be provided with a competitive circumstance that can bring the best out of them.Therefore, elites will be appeared in a country in which goverment invests on their gifted children. The more a country treasure the best students, the better future will be achieved. If measures have been taken before, this crisis would be solved earlier.although, still it is not too late for taking them. it can be reiterated that throughout the generations, gifted students have been sacrificed and they had to adapt themselves with others learning pace , by which their talent did not flourish, so they could not be in the position which they deserve but some of them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...arding to their talents in their scope. Although, others think what can be the best appr...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... with various talents of study together.I am, personally in favour with the first...
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Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...lly in favour with the first statement. it can not be refuted, to develop the dept...
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Line 1, column 643, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ational needs of all the students, with all of the pace of learning. By virtue of this iss...
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Line 1, column 695, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pupils
...ace of learning. By virtue of this issue,pupils who have higher developmental readiness...
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Line 1, column 888, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , if
... their interest during the time. In fact,if intelligent students have been split fr...
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Line 1, column 1217, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...nce that can bring the best out of them.Therefore, elites will be appeared in a country i...
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Line 1, column 1322, Rule ID: MORE_A_JJ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'a more country'?
Suggestion: a more country
...t invests on their gifted children. The more a country treasure the best students, the better ...
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Line 1, column 1525, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ill it is not too late for taking them. it can be reiterated that throughout the g...
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Line 1, column 1674, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...apt themselves with others learning pace , by which their talent did not flourish,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13698630137 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01447311968 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527397260274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.224098108 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0246744325781 0.244688304435 10% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146753447361 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440260342084 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246744325781 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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