Some people believe that technological tools such as body scanner and CCTV have significantly enhanced our safety and security, while others feel that they have resulted In a loss of privacy.Do the benefits of these items outweigh their disadvantages?
Technology has brought a gigantic revolution in the way of securing approach. Presently, some proportions of people assert that the existence of closed cuircut television has really upgraded safety standard over couple of decades. By contrast, others claim that it snatches privacy of masses. Here, I would like to establish its pros outweigh its cons.
There are manifold points to support shiny side of curtsey camera. First and foremost, nowadays crime is spreading its roots day by day like robbery, theft, pick pockets, chain snatching and so on. Thus, organizing closed cuircut television pla...
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Sentence: Presently, some proportions of people assert that the existence of closed cuircut television has really upgraded safety standard over couple of decades.
Error: cuircut Suggestion: circuit
Sentence: There are manifold points to support shiny side of securty camera.
Error: securty Suggestion: security
Sentence: Thus, organising closed cuircut television plays a phenomenal role to restrain these nasty activities and catch the criminals.
Error: cuircut Suggestion: circuit
Error: organising Suggestion: organizing
Sentence: All of above, security cameras can not be made disloyal while sometime human guards can be made decievers by offering bribe to them.
Error: decievers Suggestion: deceivers
Sentence: To begin with, the introduction of securty camera is responsible to emerge unemploment.
Error: securty Suggestion: security
Error: unemploment Suggestion: unemployment
Sentence: For example, millions of securty guards are being replaced due to modern security tools.
Error: securty Suggestion: security
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'To begin with, the introduction of securty camera is responsible to emerge unemploment. For example, millions of securty guards are being replaced due to modern security tools.'
need to talk about 'have resulted In a loss of privacy'
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