Nowadays, society are able to keep themselves updated with today’s fashion and beauty looks. The cause of such a phenomenon is due to the presence of social media and it gives a negative impact especially to the younger generation.
Many are able to follow the latest fashion trends because of their use of social media, which is a very popular yet powerful digital tool that has drawn many youths and adults alike. Just open a social networking site such as Instagram or Facebook, and users can see what is recent in the realm of fashion, beauty, food and pop culture. Among the younger demographics, it is easy to follow bloggers or influencers who constantly advertise or promote certain products that potentially attract more followers and eventually more buyers, providing a social platform to engage with customers.
However, the influence of social media gives a negative impact on young people as it could lead to a perpetual habit or an obsession to have celebrity-like external features. Having such a mindset could affect the youth’s lives psychologically. This problem arises among young girls in particular, for instance. In a world where celebrities and bloggers showing off a life full of riches and glamour, girls and young women alike would have unnecessary pressure and insecurities built up in them just because they are comparing what they are lacking with these people.
To conclude, the modern society is catching up with latest styles and looks due to the presence of social networking sites which are predominantly used by the younger generation, but it is bad for them because it could lead them to follow a materialistic lifestyle and bring them psychological pain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...ude, the modern society are catching up with latest styles and looks due to the presence of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, for instance, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17562724014 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87872756013 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9479426976 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.4 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120391453583 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455522802987 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247592971289 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651449478474 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267680193138 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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