You received a letter form an airline company for your feedback for your latest flight with them. Write a letter to the Customer Service Manager•Say what reasons made you choose this airline.•Something that you liked about the flight•Suggest an impr

Dir Sir,

I am writing to respond to the letter which I received from your company two days ago, asking about my feedback for my latest flight.

First of all, the reason I chose your airline company for that flight was because of my tiredness and disappointment about Vietjet Air, my regular choice, for their frequent delay. Thus, I decided to try a new airline firm which was yours.

Secondly, the flight was amazing and I was completely satisfied. The plane took off and landed smoothly, so airsick people like me would feel much more comfortable. Moreovers, the most interesting service that totally convince me to choose your company for my future flights was that the free wifi access. With it, I could enjoy some music or video clips which help me relax during on-board time.

Although everything seems perfect, I still have a recommendation of the food menu. In my opinon, the dishes should be varied more widely instead of only five options on the menu, especially for long-hour flights.

Your faithfully,
Ken Tran

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94857142857 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55399806626 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708571428571 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5085385067 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 4.34317383033 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240196945994 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831256342716 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834762833244 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14527662682 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854332234795 0.0580467560999 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.