In some countries children under 16 are not allowed to leave school by law and get full time work
A most of the governments of different countries have made a strict law that children who are under 16 are restricted to work and they should go for schooling and concentrate on their studies. And I strongly say that is a good step.
Firstly when young ones are not allowed to work they would able to focus on their studies. This is because if children go for a work he or she can’t get time for education. For instance, a survey conducted in India that children who go for work are not able to gain proper knowledge and skills and if they get chance to attend a classes or school in the evening they won’t able to study properly because they are completely go tired by doing work for whole day.
In addition to this, as children’s are future of our country who are going to lead to our country, so we should encourage them to go for schooling. As they go to school they develop new skills. And after completing their school and gain a good knowledge can move further for high education in college. If they have good education, they can easily get a good job in best company.
To recapitulate, in some countries have taken a good step to stop child labour and admit the students in the school for their betterment
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...uld encourage them to go for schooling. As they go to school they develop new skil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48888888889 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58685757218 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528888888889 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.744484327 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225897703037 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923201612601 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730748863052 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151545607958 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589552345596 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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