You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Hi Yaman,
I hope you are doing very well. I just wanted to let you know that I finally have moved into a new apartment in the AZ square near the national library. As you may know I was struggling every day to reach my office at the time since my previous flat was away almost 45 km.
let me describe my new apartment for you; It contains 2 bedrooms with private bathrooms and a big living room. Fortunately, all furniture are new and very stylish. As I told you before, I am surrounded with plenty of entertainment centers such as cinemas, clubs and big shopping malls.
Anyway, I am really wondering if you have some free times to visit me for a couple of days, I am pretty sure that you are going to love the place and the flat.
Please let me know when you have free time to prepare myself.
hope to see you then!
Take care
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... hope to see you then! Take care Bilal
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Suggestion:
...to see you then! Take care Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, finally, if, may, really, so, then, well, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 710.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4099378882 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31444607253 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645962732919 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7771570405 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8888888889 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193297414591 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811702908311 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424771666812 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111190745231 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196410694115 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.