36) Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s act. What is your opinion? Support it with personal example.
Children’s behaviour is totally depended on have they have been treated or trained. Childhood is the phase where person don’t know what is right and what is wrong. Children behave the way their parents have treated them and most of thing children adapt from their parents thus, I totally agree the statement that parent’s should be held legally responsible for their children’s act.
Beginning with positive side, Parents will be more aware to their children’s activities and they have to make free time to spend with their children as most of parents leave their children to baby keepers for job thus children adapts others manners. Parents will try to set perfect example of manners. For an example nowadays there is a rule arrived in which if person below 16 is caught driving vehicles their parents will be jailed. Thus parents will not allow their children to do such illegal activities and children will also be scared and make sure that their parents don’t get punished because of them.
On the other hand, As I mentioned above some children learns bad things and manners from baby keepers and their playmates which parents might not be aware of. Sometime parents might get punished because of children without any mistake too.
In conclusion, According to me I totally agree the statement as it makes parents aware about the children’s activities and mates and can help to make better standard for children’s safety as well as society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 158, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the parents') or simply say ''most parents''.
Suggestion: most of the parents; most parents
...ee time to spend with their children as most of parents leave their children to baby keepers fo...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...wadays there is a rule arrived in which if person below 16 is caught driving vehic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14403292181 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72529912676 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539094650206 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4054152127 50.4703680194 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 104.977214359 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406908340688 0.242375264174 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167191039413 0.0925447433944 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110884101782 0.071462118173 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243781509392 0.151781067708 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115066986324 0.0609392437508 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 12.6369458128 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 53.1260098522 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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