Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent.
Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
You should write at least 250 words.
Dear Albert,
This is Saman, one of your tenant in your apartment residing at Richmond Town. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on the broken wardrobe in master bedroom.
The door is loosely coupled with wardrobe, as there is a missing screw that connects the wardrobe and the door. Due to this reason, we are experiencing strange and annoying noise while opening and closing the door and moreover as the door is not clinched to the wall, we are unable to close the door completely. This eventually is disturbing my new born twins by waking them and making them to cry due to lack of complete satisfactory sleep.
Hence, I recommend you to fix this issue as soon as possible with carpenter's help so that my kids and my spouse can experience a peaceful, noise-free ambience of the room and take a complete satisfactory nap whenever necessary.
Yours Sincerely,
Saman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 762.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98039215686 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79533857054 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653594771242 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2094025555 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.857142857 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0651846757309 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0314759768444 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0141287361531 0.0843802449381 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042553106388 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113093124234 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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