Do you think that TV programs, movies and video games influence young people's behavior?

Grammar and spelling errors:
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task 2 televisiontv progra video games an...
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task 2 televisiontv progra video games and movies are part ...
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...ily lives occupation and entertainment. this kind of leisure can affect ones behavio...
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...inment. this kind of leisure can affect ones behavior due to how they manage thier u...
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... they manage thier usage and exposure. I believe that young peoples behavior are ...
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...age and exposure. I believe that young peoples behavior are influenced by movies, vide...
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...o games and television. First of all, mimicing what is seen on the tv influenc...
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...icing what is seen on the tv influences one thoughts. For instance, when I was young my brot...
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...s and the language spoken in the movie. when we could be playing with other kids we ...
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...s and the language spoken in the movie. when we could be playing with other kids we ...
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...age from Kungu-fu movies to scare them. this influenced they way we behaved for our ...
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...ay we behaved for our entire childhood. therefore, tv, movie, and video games play a part...
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...v, movie, and video games play a part in young peoples behavior. Second, tv p...
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...t in young peoples behavior. Second, tv programs and video game provide of vi...
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...fected his behavior because everyday he use to behave like him by trying to act as ...
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...fected his behavior because everyday he use to behave like him by trying to act as ...
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...o act as a super hero and good gun-man. therefore this example illustrates how visual eff...
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...o act as a super hero and good gun-man. therefore this example illustrates how visual eff...
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...o games, and movies due to the fact that they are prone to mimicing what is prese...
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...e prone to mimicing what is presented in the movies or tv program, and due to the...
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...ice them to adapting the same behavior. therefore, it is a responsibility for every gardi...
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...it is a responsibility for every gardian to monitor what young people watch becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78062678063 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49806704439 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495726495726 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2402165618 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335394193227 0.236089414692 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142149445837 0.076458572812 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114103987804 0.0737576698707 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241173218474 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629435150723 0.0645574589148 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.