The various reasons for migration from and to the UK are shown by two separate pie charts, for the year 2007.
Overall, it is clear from the chart that nearly a third of migrants came to the UK in search of a definite job. Additionally, slightly below the fraction of people entered emigrated from the UK to find a permanent job, in 2007.
The majority of the lot who immigrated to the UK was looking for a definite job. Furthermore, many students also migrated to the UK for their studies as equal to just above a quarter. There was also a significant fraction of immigrants who moved to join their family.
The most noticeable thing from the emigration data is that the majority of residents of the UK left it to find a definite job. While just under a quarter of people migrated to other countries to get a job. Finally, there was no reason stated by lots of people for their emigration.
- The bar chart below shows the results of a survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and shows factors affecting their work performance. 73
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
- The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The graph shows the income of four cafes in New York in last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. 78
- The pie charts show the main reasons for migration to and from the UK in 2007. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the UK left it to find a definite job. While just under a quarter of people migrated...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, look, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 739.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53374233129 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60521745082 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.8138522878 43.030603864 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35501207254 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146480934587 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126390843519 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243984661109 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136830663145 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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