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Several individuals opine keeping the animals in safari parks is inhuman, therefore they should be banned, nevertheless others believe the animal parks are a kind of sanctuary for conservation of rare species. this essay sternly recommends that they should be abolished. both view points will be precisely analysed to conclude in favor of banning these deleterious places. time is changing and so are peoples opinion in rights of the other creatures. it is irrefutable the menageries can be beneficially used as a nature reserve for the animals threated by extinction as well as they can be well preserved to be ensure about their good physical condition. Furthermore breeding programs can be executed associated with saving them from extinction. Even thought, at least zoos should be definitely regulated by goverment inasmuch as alot of violence which have been observed happening at there.Owing to potential adverse consequences, what can be reiterated is, keeping the animals captivate is brutal, by virtue of they would be hurt either be well kept or do not. The time, at which they are deprived of their freedom.Thus, it is glaringly obvious the devastating effects can not be deterred. Had the society known to what extent zoos have irreparable impressions they would have protested to close them. To recapitulate, after a meticulous analysis of this issue on periliouse impacts on the animals, especially rare ones, it seems that some regulations ought to be passed to be able to alleviate and mitigate the negative effects of the zoos. it is hoped that these kinds of enormous steps will have been taken in to 2020 to preserve the animals, whereas, if they have been done, this issue would be solved earlier.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, at least, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12455516014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87482375872 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.9770517768 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0586829639413 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0244503563211 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546868061277 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0586829639413 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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