New stories on TV and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words
What is your opinion on this?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relavant examples from your own knowledge or experience
The ways news is published/telecasted being evolved in its own way in this modern world. Many people think that news channel / paper presenting the news with a picture makes the news more effective than just publishing the story. I will explain details as to how the picture addition impacts the effective of the news conveyed.
The newspapers publishes the articles based on the facts. So it is important to have the facts set right. Inorder ensure the actual incidents are being published we need the details of the incident. For example if there is a fire accident happened in a mall/ company , The newspaper should try to cover the story on how this fire was initated and why it was not handled properly rather than just sharing the picture of the incident. Some people believe that the editor should narrate or explain the situation as if he/she has witnessed the incident. For example the narration of how the final hour of the test got anti climatic for the host team. The news with good writing always holds its place on the readers.
Despite the above mentioned readers, We have a whole group of next generation who is running for everything and anything in life. So in-order for the news to reach the new set of readers the effectiveness can be brought in adding a picture with it. As the saying goes Picture speaks more than words, For the current generation every piece of information has to be attached with a photographic display to convey the gist of the incident. For example if you article informs the reader about a particular diet you need a picture of a model sporting with your diet plan. Every other Tv reports the news with the display of the actual incident that happened in-order reach the audience. This news is conveyed and holds in the viewer/reader’s mind quite comfortably.
The news punlishing in the print media and television had its own revolution and the current generation expects the channel / newspaper to have some picture to look at while read or view a channel. This way the news is being conveyed effectively to the viewers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
The ways news is published/telecasted being evol...
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Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'publish'.
Suggestion: publish
...the news conveyed. The newspapers publishes the articles based on the facts. So it ...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ire accident happened in a mall/ company , The newspaper should try to cover the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81337047354 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7227775519 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515320334262 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8756610893 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9444444444 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182231689561 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532775839224 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364282542818 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109082371049 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192605422089 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.