The line graph illustrates the percentage of age group of English viewers to the movie theater from 1990 to 2010. Overall, older people prefer to go to the movie theater rather than the younger.
In 1990, there was 37% of aged 44-54 going to the cinema and 35% of aged 34-44. After a gradual increase to exactly 40%, the ratio of the older dipped briefly to the starting point while the latter was just above 30% during the period of 10 years. Both age group then experienced a significant rise before those above 44 reached a peak of 52% and the younger one was 44% in 2010.
In contrast, the youngest group was three times less than the 44-54 group in 1990 while the 24-34 was 25%. The percentage of those from 14 to 24 attending cinema hovered around 15% before climbing to 20% whereas the latter fluctuated wildly to more than 30% in the next 15 years. The former then stayed constantly at 33% compared to 21% of the 14-24 from 2005 to 2010
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, if, then, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45714285714 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17725534018 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5884283395 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0394775772257 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0189557432505 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0264462144777 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0304034996582 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140584555295 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.0 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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