Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is more important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends
Friendship plays a prominent role in every individual's life, and keeping old friends instead of making new ones is one of the most contentious issues among people. Some people prefer make new friends rather than keep old ones, while some others have an opposite opinion. From my vantage point it is crucial to keep old friends than make new friends. In what follows , I will elaborate on my perspective.
First of all, it is significant to be mentioned that, old friends know us better and we have many similar interests and maybe same lifestyle. For instance, I have two friends from my high school. We are friends for 10 years and have common interests and know how to make happy each other. In our leisure time we spend spectacular time with each other without any misunderstanding of our behavior which can lead to bad consequences. And also we have same goal to study abroad so we motivate each other to study more and have better performance.
Another reason which deserves some attention is that,old friends are like our family member and we can rely on them in any situation since we experience predicaments and happy time with them. The result of a research conducted in my country underscore the fact that , a friendship which last more than 5 years will last forever because people with these type of friendship are trustable persons and also they are more successful in overcoming the issues.
The last but not the least,However making new friends will broaden our perspective and fortify our social life , but friendship is a worthwhile sense of human and intimacy will create during long time. Hence, the old friends not only enhance our social skill, but also motivate us to be creative based on our interests.
From what has been discussed above,we may safely reach the conclusion that keeping old friends are more important and beneficial since they are not only our friends, they are like our family members with same interests and goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87425149701 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60840481487 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8450994544 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.285714286 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309232062323 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119737033171 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790531989085 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179946940914 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892706522668 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.