Teaching is a novel profession and generally teachers are highly respected in a society. With the advancement of technology, life and society has been tremendously changed by this time. A controversial question which is often raised is that whether teachers are respected and valued by society today compared to the past. From my perspective I believe that in most cases teachers are somewhat neglected in society. Essential and persuasive evidence will be provided in the following paragraphs to verify my judgement.
Whenever I think of teacher of my childhood time, I see a learned person who dedicated his life to pass his knowledge to the students. In past, only the best scholars were selected to be a teacher and they were considered like gems in the society. Therefore, when a person gained enough knowledge and motivated to be a pedagogy, it was much appreciated in the society. However, things have been changed a lot today and now teaching becomes a job like other professional sectors. People without much knowledge or dedication might get involved into this profession. This situation gradually decreases faith and respect on them.
In addition, another important factor contributes to degradation of teaching which is monetary benefits of this profession. People always look for money and salary becomes a key factor while choosing any career path. As salary has not been increased proportionally compared to other sectors, educated people do not find it attractive to pursue career in teaching. Moreover, many teachers are now getting involved in unethical ways to make money. For instance, in my city, private coaching centers are rising fast and some teachers always try to force students to get private coaching rather than learning in school. Therefore, inadequate salary and greediness of some people causes humiliation of this novel job.
Last but not least, with the advancement of technology, people can get educational resources online free of cost. Thus, one might think that it is easier to learn something using online resources. Consequently, students do not feel the importance of teacher in their life, as they can get every resources online. In our childhood, we could not make any progress without support of our teachers. Therefore, we are much grateful to our teachers to help our growth.
To wrap it up, I must say that a novel profession like teaching has been deteriorated due to many reasons and teachers are not much respected and somewhat neglected in currents society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the past'?
Suggestion: In the past
... to pass his knowledge to the students. In past, only the best scholars were selected t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i think, in addition, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2118226601 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87846216232 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532019704433 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.0687303427 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.652173913 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140036599938 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0372554673758 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463322713713 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740627527347 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314994132207 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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