Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some set of individuals are of the opinion that the most pressing environmental issue of recent times is some plant species and animals going into extinct whereas, others believed there are lots environmental problems that are more important. In my view, I believe there are more factors affecting the environment today like Air pollution and poor sewage system.
On the one hand, some group of people opined that loss of some plant species and animals are affecting their environment. People pay visit to several Agricultural development centers or horticulturist to see some sets of plants or flowers or possibly purchase them to beautify and give pleasant scent to their homes. They are disappointed as these flowers are not available. Relatively, some specie of animals are believed not to been seen again in this present age. Many individual's visit to the zoo is to see for themselves some creatures that have been read about or watch in some documentaries; but, all they see are same animals that have been seen over and over again in the past visits. For instance, it was observed in the register of visitors to the university of ibadan's zoo Nigeria that 85% of the tourist felt that their visit was not complete because of the absence of some animals in the Zoo like a Dinosaur.
On the other hand, others believed that there are more to environmental problems like Air pollution and poor sewage system. Of a truth, these should be the most disturbing issue. Air pollution is becoming a problem that is getting out of hand. A lot of communities are affected by this solely because of emision of dangerous substances like carbon monoxide from heavy vehicles leading to serious health conditions like Pneumonia. In addition, poor sewage system is another factor to be considered. Several rivers and bridges has been turned to dumping ground. The environment is entirely polluted to an extent that food and drinks are no longer safe. For example, a research conducted by WHO kwara state Nigeria revealed that 92% of children suffering from broncho pneumonia inhaled a dangerous substance and about 92% the resident suffers Cholera.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0308988764 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71025787104 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52808988764 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3522501031 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192408334064 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612098450404 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884345882052 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147676354588 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807662762182 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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