Essay topics: Some people believe that the best way to control accidents on city streets is to lower the speed limit, but others think there are better ways to improve the safety on city streets.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the salad days of Millennium, some believe that by reducing the speed limit will decrease the accidents on city roads whereas others argue that there are significant ways to enhance safety system on city streets. The following paragraphs would shed light on both approaches and why I believe that the arguments for maintaining low-speed are stronger.
There are two main reasons why people believe that control the vehicle speed on roads will have a significant reduction on the scale of the accident. First and foremost, if the person drives slowly, he or she can have full control on roadside pedestrians and act according to the traffic lights, and in the case, if any person or child gets stuck in the middle of the road, a driver can stop the vehicle without colliding with pedestrians. For instance, in all developed nations, a traffic rule is to follow 40 km/hr. on local city roads and stop 50 meters prior to the zebra crossing. Furthermore, lowering the vehicle speed won't cause traffic jam which leads to maintaining certain gap between cars and trucks to avoid major damage to their vehicle bodies and reduce casualties during accidents.
However, others argue that we should have the best ways to manage speeds of cars and two-wheelers on city streets. Firstly, the government should regulate laws of traffic system such as collecting huge fine from civilians and youngsters who breach rules and regulations and involved in a street race on city roads. Secondly, encouraging citizens to commute by public transport which significantly reduces the proportion of accidents. For example, light rail can minimize many cars and two-wheeler commuters during peak hours.
In conclusion, both sides of the argument have merits. However, I believe it is better to focus on limiting the vehicle speed on city roads would cut the number of major and minor accidents. At the same time, the government should tackle this issue by implementing any of the aforementioned solutions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 519, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13803680982 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71794374236 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573619631902 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1512880237 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.642857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242785700151 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079122376037 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958239386646 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158425713464 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859729034894 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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