You want to take a course related to your work. Write a letter to your employer.In your letter, you should:describe what the course isexplain how it will benefit the companygive suitable time schedule.

Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in taking Project Management course which will be starting from next month i.e October

The course on project management will teach different tools and techniques used to handle the project effectively and efficiently. Nowadays we are encountering different complex projects, this course will help us to deal with those projects.

The main purpose for this course is that it will help us to tackle the complex projects by using updated tools and techniques for the better performance which will be beneficial for the company. In addition to that it will also enhance the managerial skill the employees.

It is a two month course, with one class in a week. The class will be on every Thursday starting at 5:30 pm so it will be suitable for me to leave the office at 5:00 pm so that I can reach on time.

I look forward for your positive response.

Yours Sincerely,
Saba Khan

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86585365854 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60570691116 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603658536585 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.9773124113 44.8134815571 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.75 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175420373641 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749209117466 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459733632101 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933567545131 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344360197722 0.0580467560999 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.