OVERPOPULATION in many major URBAN centres around the world is a major problem.
What are the causes of this?
How can this problem be solved?
Owing to the surge in urbanization, more and more people from rural areas are relocating to cities, making them over-populated. The reasons for this global concern are unavailability of modern education and job facilities in the countryside. However, the development of educational institutes and multinational companies in these parts can curb this problem.
To embark on, the crucial factor for the proliferation in the number of people in towns is that the undeveloped parts of the countries such as villages lack the basic necessities. Primarily, they do not consist of higher academic institutions, because of which students are obliged to move to developed cities in order to acquire better education. Another reason is that there is no availability of corporates and industries where an individual can find employment, thus forcing them to migrate to cities in order to avail superior career opportunities. For instance, the development report by the government of India provided that there is a 20% increase in the migration of rural families to metropolitan areas from the last year which clearly signifies the growth of population in urban localities.
To alleviate this problem certain measures are required to be taken by authorities. Firstly, the development of schools for secondary and universities for tertiary education can provide the opportunity for students to gain quality learning at their native grounds, thereby reducing their urgency to travel to other places for studies. Secondly, establishing multi-sector companies for employment in the countrysides can minimize the countryside migration in search of a job, consequently, can solve the situation of overpopulation in urban areas. For example, to combat the issue of the increasing number of people in Delhi the governs developed the regional places of Gurgaon and Noida by introducing metros and multinational companies which distributed Delhi's population equally to these regions.
In conclusion, although overpopulation is a serious issue in urban regions due to the migration of people from undeveloped sites for attaining profession and studies, with the effective measures by the government to provide modern facilities for career and academics can resolve this menace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...the countries such as villages lack the basic necessities. Primarily, they do not consist of high...
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Line 13, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es for attaining profession and studies, with the effective measures by the gover...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1927.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61807580175 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24251731227 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548104956268 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.8919987166 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.583333333 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5833333333 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134994346136 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605962428509 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706055654315 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914068747198 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412220779893 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.91 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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