The statement claims that the leaders should focus on the need of the majority than that of the minority groups which seems plausible. Leaders are the people selected by a majority of people with a hope that they will listen, admire them in future. Leader is a voice of a majority of a people in a society or a nation. Thus, majority should be listened first rather than the voice of minority.
It is obvious that in most of the cases of the public choice, there is not always a full support to anyone. There is atleast modicum people who are in oppose to the leader. Being a leader is not an easy task as convincing peoples with your ideas, visions is very tough. Today, in the era of science and technology, people are very much oblivious and educated about the scenario around globe. Majority of the people only choose who is painstaking and coherent to their manifesto. In terms of need also, the need of the society is reflected by the majority of the people. Majority of people reflect the need of a society in terms of education, social security, health care. Majority is the only principle which is followed all over the world and we cannot easily gainsay this process which is universally accepted. Majority is not attained by a person in fact it is his/her vision, dream which he had presented to the public. Majority is a universally standardised and accepted reference to choose a leader and leader should also be magnanimous towards his/her followers.
We have a example of the great leader of the United States, the president of the United States, Donald Trump who got a majority of vote in the election 2018 and he is also doing accordingly to the promise he had made to those american citizens who helped him to win the election. He owe a debt to pay to those millions of voices of those majority of the people.
The Indian prime minister, Narendra Modi, who came up from a middles class family brought a vision in future which was the voice of majority of indian peoples who were from a middle class or low income family. He have also brought out the policies to improve the lifestyle of those majority middle class peoples. So he is a successful leader, the prime minister of the India for consecutive times.
However, it is not always right to focus on the right of the majority. If there is a society in which there is majority of muslim population and they are demanding the policy which directly affects the sentiments of people of other religion and a xenophobic leader also pass this, there will be a huge war. It is not always true that majority is correct.
The majority of the workers demanding for shortening the work-hour and increasing the salary is not good for the companies profit. The managing director or CEO will not approve it though it is need of majority of workers.
Thus, leaders from a local leader to global leader, should prioritize the needs of majority before the needs of minority groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...eople with a hope that they will listen, admire them in future. Leader is a voice...
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...ope that they will listen, admire them in future. Leader is a voice of a majority of a p...
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... most of the cases of the public choice, there is not always a full support to an...
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...s not an easy task as convincing peoples with your ideas, visions is very tough. ...
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... process which is universally accepted. Majority is not attained by a person in fact it ...
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...m which he had presented to the public. Majority is a universally standardised and acce...
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...d presented to the public. Majority is a universally standardised and accepted re...
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...nd accepted reference to choose a leader and leader should also be magnanimous to...
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...ous towards his/her followers. We have a example of the great leader of the Unit...
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... who helped him to win the election. He owe a debt to pay to those millions of voic...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this majority' or 'those majorities'?
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...t to pay to those millions of voices of those majority of the people. The Indian prime minist...
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...nister, Narendra Modi, who came up from a middles class family brought a vision in future...
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...a middle class or low income family. He have also brought out the policies to improv...
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Message: Did you mean 'this majority' or 'those majorities'?
Suggestion: this majority; those majorities
...he policies to improve the lifestyle of those majority middle class peoples. So he is a succes...
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...ctly affects the sentiments of people of other religion and a xenophobic leader a...
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...he needs of majority before the needs of minority groups.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, however, if, so, thus, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2420.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 522.0 442.535393258 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63601532567 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77988695657 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50280739598 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2181322483 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.88 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.24 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149646737037 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509539222021 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486354419218 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079223036405 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492522753722 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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