Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
I partially agree with the claim mentioned in the passage about the extent that many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because there are certain things in our society that needs to be monitored by laws and certain things that people must be self conscious about.
Firstly in India the mob lynching is one of the most dangerous issue in which many people are killed majority of which are Muslim it is because of lack of legal systems against the criminals because the government lead by Mr narendra modi is supporter of Hindu radical group Rss because of which goons are getting support in killing many of the innocent Muslims which was not the case when there was congress lead government in India people were scared of laws. In this case the argument fails because Hindu goons had crimes in there hearts but they were not able to execute it due to the strict rules during the congress regime.
There are also some cases where people must be ethically aware in order to solve the problem which occurs in our society like throwing the garbage in the streets. This kinds of problems must be solved by different approach by awaring people not by punishing them problems
Removing the social taboo like chaupadi pratha ( it is a social taboo where a girl must live in cowshed during her mensuration cycle typically practiced in rural Nepal) these kinds of issue should be solved inside the society by awaring people about its ill effects not by putting them in jail.
Therefore we can say there exists different kinds of problems in the society and for solving these problems we need to come up with different kinds of ideas and solution in order to solve the problem that benefits the society as a whole. either laws and orders or awareness cannot solve every problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 317.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71293375394 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19659409648 2.79657885939 79% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507886435331 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 23.0359550562 195% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.894567325 60.3974514979 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.428571429 118.986275619 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.2857142857 23.4991977007 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.21951772744 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327493310295 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156864941943 0.0831039109588 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114612300088 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184493118135 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12165239497 0.0667264976115 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 14.1392134831 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 48.8420337079 70% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.93 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.8971910112 223% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.0 11.2143820225 178% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.7820224719 170% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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