Smacking children is the best form of discipline.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Smacking children has become increasingly popular in certain demographics of society. Some parents claim that it is the best way to raise and teach manners to children. From my vantage point, physical punishment is entirely unnecessary. Reasons to prove my point of view will be covered in the following paragraphs.
Parents are constantly concern about the way their children behave around the family and other people. Therefore, by their standard smacking is the only way to dictate proper behavior. To be more specific, some parents believe that children would behave better if they fear of getting smacked. In addition, pain that comes with physical punishment deters children from committing uncertain acts that are unacceptable in our society. Indeed, there are times that this form of parenting can be useful when all other options not affecting the child’s behavior. overall, physical punishment gain popularity among parents as a result of a few instances that changed the children’s action and forced them to behave.
Despite some examples that smacking children have actually been beneficial, the idea that physical punishment is the best form of discipline is completely preposterous. This form of parenting would result in unfixable physical problems that would stay with the child for the rest of his/her life. Also, as a result of physical punishment, there are children who would suffer from a great deal of mental and emotional problems. It has been proven that children would behave better if parents approach them differently. For example, a study shows that talking to children about the consequences of their actions have a significantly higher effect on their behavior. In brief, the days of using force as a way of parenting are long gone and modern ways have proven to be more successful.
In conclusion, this essay argued that why some parents are in favor of smacking their offsprings. From a practical standpoint, I am completely against this form of parenting and believe that raising a child does not require a physical punishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 564, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30211480363 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84636079764 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522658610272 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.374760309 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136812711199 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513116843524 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042642856809 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093148235047 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219481405685 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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