Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well.
Maybe you don’t remember me but we met on a plan during our journey from New Delhi to New York on September 5. I sat next to you and we discussed multiple topics at length.
I am writing this letter in connection with a possible job opportunity in one of your restaurants, mentioned during our meeting. Though you didn’t specify the details of the job, I’d like to inform you that I have a hotel management degree as well as working experience of a chef and I am greatly interested in the chef’s job. However, if this position isn’t available then I am willing to take any management job as well.
I consider myself suitable for a chef’s job as I have worked in multiple restaurants as well as in hotel kitchens. My chef experience includes working in all shifts under extreme pressure and I know how to handle customers’ choices as well as food critics.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Sumit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82183908046 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9409849129 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.882823837 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193021477435 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808484107436 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060795748841 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101497208945 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661004098241 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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