To have leadership in government, this can be achieved by instilling co-operation rather than competition in young people by society .
Young people and their whole generation is the new face of the future world. Hence, instilling sophasticated qualities in them is the need of an hour. Worldwide efforts are been taken to evolve better education system for young people which can not only educate them about fundamentals and theory but also to instill formal ettiquetes, pragmatic skills in them which will further prosper and can be applied in better living of nation. Hence, I agree to author for some extent when he says, co-operation is important skill to instill in young people so as to prepare them for leadership in governemnt.
But, I also disagree with author, when he says, co-operation must be instilled rather than competition to have leadership in governement. As the word ' leadership' itself is competitive enough to say, co-operation is not of prime importance than competitiveness. Both competitiveness and co-operation can be instilled in future young people by society and it can surely result into a better leadership governement.
Young people will gather their knowledge from regular formal schooling , right from nursery to primary to secondary to higher secondary and then graduation. If we look into the curriculum set for them, one can easily note that, the social pragmatic skills are the foundation basis for any stage curriculum. Hence co-operation can be naturally instilled in young people.
Likewise, during the development period or education , the society and social environment plays a key role in teaching the pragmatic skills to young people. According to normal human psychology, all cultural values are based on empathy. Empathy is nothing but putting yourselves into other's shoes. It has many names in different cultures as, humanity, social understanding etc. Hence the quality author is stating,' co-operation' can be easily instilled between young people.
I think, co-operation and competition are the most essential skills for a virtuous leader. If you are not competitive enough you may fail to make your impression which is necessary to be a leader. Mr. Narendra Modi, is the live all rounder leader example infront of us. He has taken the nationinto whole new level and has opened many gates to new opportunities. He is co-operative enough as well as competitive enough to take the nation in higher rankings.
Owing to above stated examples and evidences I feel that, competition is also a key skill to be instilled in young people by society along with 'co-operation'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, likewise, look, may, second, so, still, then, well, as to, i feel, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2096.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26633165829 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99709859698 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522613065327 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.9303022925 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8095238095 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9523809524 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441573874885 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133585130499 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13078374633 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243654530429 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143381663458 0.0667264976115 215% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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