Write a letter to a friend of yours whom you have not met for a long time. In your letter, describe how you have been and describe a few changes in your life during that time. Also invite him or her to join you soon.
Dear Thu,
I am sorry I haven't written for a long time. How are you? Are Su and Ben fine? My family is still good and we remember your family so much.
I am writing to invite you to attend a party, which will be celebrated at six o'clock on September 29th 2019,to certificate my new house. I didn't live in a flat. After 6 year with a hard working I have bought a small house with two bed room at Go Vap District, near my family house. I also changed my job. I employed as a skin-care staff by Nu Spa and Clinic.As I told you before,this is my passion so I really feel exciting when I do that work. In addition, this job give me a high salary and more time to take care my children.
I have more things to tell you about so I hope you can participate with me.My address is 488 Pham Van Chieu Ward 6, Go Vap District.
See you soon
Calla Balls
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- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job You will be there for three months and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay Write to an accommodation rental office In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Describe the typ 48
- Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 61
- You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job You will be there for three months and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay Write to an accommodation rental office In your letter Tell them how long you are staying Describe the typ 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
Dear Thu, I am sorry I havent written for a long time. How are you? A...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[10]
Message: The singular proper name Su must be used with 'is'.
Suggestion: Is
...t written for a long time. How are you? Are Su and Ben fine? My family is still goo...
^^^
Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... party, which will be celebrated at six oclock on September 29th 2019,to certificate m...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...9th 2019,to certificate my new house. I didnt live in a flat. After 6 year with a har...
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Line 9, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... a skin-care staff by Nu Spa and Clinic.As I told you before,this is my passion so...
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Line 9, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...y Nu Spa and Clinic.As I told you before,this is my passion so I really feel exciting...
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Line 13, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...t so I hope you can participate with me.My address is 488 Pham Van Chieu Ward 6, G...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m Van Chieu Ward 6, Go Vap District. See you soon Calla Balls
^^^^
Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 6, Go Vap District. See you soon Calla Balls
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13529411765 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28035843719 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1548428394 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5833333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216880114981 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853016812501 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766571346446 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141134634443 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376331013251 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.