Write a letter to a friend of yours whom you have not met for a long time In your letter describe how you have been and describe a few changes in your life during that time Also invite him or her to join you soon

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Write a letter to a friend of yours whom you have not met for a long time. In your letter, describe how you have been and describe a few changes in your life during that time. Also invite him or her to join you soon.

Dear Thu,

I am sorry I haven't written for a long time. How are you? Are Su and Ben fine? My family is still good and we remember your family so much.

I am writing to invite you to attend a party, which will be celebrated at six o'clock on September 29th 2019,to certificate my new house. I didn't live in a flat. After 6 year with a hard working I have bought a small house with two bed room at Go Vap District, near my family house. I also changed my job. I employed as a skin-care staff by Nu Spa and Clinic.As I told you before,this is my passion so I really feel exciting when I do that work. In addition, this job give me a high salary and more time to take care my children.

I have more things to tell you about so I hope you can participate with me.My address is 488 Pham Van Chieu Ward 6, Go Vap District.

See you soon

Calla Balls

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
Dear Thu, I am sorry I havent written for a long time. How are you? A...
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Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[10]
Message: The singular proper name Su must be used with 'is'.
Suggestion: Is
...t written for a long time. How are you? Are Su and Ben fine? My family is still goo...
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Line 9, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... party, which will be celebrated at six oclock on September 29th 2019,to certificate m...
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Line 9, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...9th 2019,to certificate my new house. I didnt live in a flat. After 6 year with a har...
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Line 9, column 359, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... a skin-care staff by Nu Spa and Clinic.As I told you before,this is my passion so...
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Line 9, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...y Nu Spa and Clinic.As I told you before,this is my passion so I really feel exciting...
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Line 13, column 76, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...t so I hope you can participate with me.My address is 488 Pham Van Chieu Ward 6, G...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m Van Chieu Ward 6, Go Vap District. See you soon Calla Balls
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Line 17, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 6, Go Vap District. See you soon Calla Balls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.13529411765 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28035843719 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.711764705882 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1548428394 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.5833333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216880114981 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853016812501 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766571346446 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141134634443 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376331013251 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.14 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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