You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months,and you would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Describe the type of accommodation you would like
Explain what facilities you will need nearby
Dear Sir or Madam,
I will be moving to Carrick for three months with a short term placement for my job, and am looking for a suitable place to rent for the period.
Ideally, I am looking for something with easy access to the motorways as I will be spending a great deal of time traveling to nearby cities. I am not particularly concerned with the particulars of the house itself as I will only need a bedroom and a bathroom, and do not anticipate spending much time in the kitchen.
I will, however, need internet access as I will be working at home on my computer and will need to be in touch with my head office throughout my stay.
I will also need to be within a reasonable distance from a shopping area, although it will only be for the essentials like bread and milk.
If you have anything you feel may be suitable, then I would be very interested to hear from you.
With regards,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
... a short term placement for my job, and am looking for a suitable place to rent fo...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y head office throughout my stay. I will also need to be within a reasonabl...
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Line 25, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed to hear from you. With regards, Calla Balls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50588235294 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52587988712 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582352941176 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.2438081901 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.428571429 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252218144976 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110264949865 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895437597651 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150092284437 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805041472068 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.