You are temporarily moving to a new city for your job. You will be there for three months,and you
would like to rent some accommodation for your stay. Write to an accommodation rental office. In your letter
Tell them how long you are staying
Describe the type of accommodation you would like
Explain what facilities you will need nearby
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I am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to inquire about short term accommodation.As currently I am designated as a Chief Financial Officer of ABC LTD which is transnational company, thus in order to grab overseas experience I have been shifted to Canada for three months.
Although I would be there without my family, I would prefer to live in a detached house . My office is situated in the down town area of Toronto, therefore it would be highly appreciable if my stay would be in the vicinity of my office. Basically, my job is quite demanding, thus I would not like to waste my time in travelling. I need two bedrooms en suited with bathrooms, a kitchen along with a lawn.
Ideally, I would need a proper internet connectivity as I would have to do a lot of work from house. Moreover, shopping areas should be at near by area. If you have anything you feel may be suitable, then i would be interested to hear from you.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Yours faithfully
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...I am John, dweller of Huston Street U.S.A, penning down this epistle to inquire a...
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Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
... inquire about short term accommodation.As currently I am designated as a Chief Fi...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...would prefer to live in a detached house . My office is situated in the down town ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...athrooms, a kitchen along with a lawn. Ideally, I would need a proper internet ...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ould need a proper internet connectivity as I would have to do a lot of work from...
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Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Moreover, shopping areas should be at near by area. If you have anything you f...
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Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
... Moreover, shopping areas should be at near by area. If you have anything you feel may...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...anything you feel may be suitable, then i would be interested to hear from you. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, then, therefore, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6393442623 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82649976082 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.553604876 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225125602516 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863193021787 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737772982534 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12411635186 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552502689323 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.