Nowadays, many nations have more young citizens than elderly ones. I personally believe this is a favorable situation because the youth are healthier and more productive, even though they still need to learn important lessons from the senior population in order to contribute with their country’s development.
On the one hand, young people can bring many positive features to a nation, because not only they present better health conditions, but also because they are the workforce of many important companies. In other words, the youth will not need to receive as many healthcare as the old people; also, they are still working, which means they generate revenues for the government by paying taxes, consequently they do not rely on public funds. For example, European countries are concerned with the number of retirements, which increased 51% in the last decade, so the public funds are decreasing enormously because of their ageing population and the lack of taxpayers in their cities. Thus, young residents contribute with the countries’ economy, which is essential to make the population thrive.
On the other hand, it is crucial to mention the importance of the elderly people to any country’s development, as they have the life experience needed to understand and solve many problems society faces. This means that young adults would not be able to develop solutions without the wisdom of their ancestors. For instance, Google has many young employees as they are very innovative people and create many original products and ideas, but some high posts are occupied by senior workers, especially in the management sector of the company, because they have more work experience and a sense of responsibility that most young staff does not. Therefore, it is vital to understand the contribution of every person despite their age.
To conclude, although senior citizens can contribute with their knowledge and life experience, I firmly believe that a younger population is more beneficial to any country, as they do not require many healthcare and are still paying taxes to help subsidize public services.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
..., the youth will not need to receive as many healthcare as the old people; also, the...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun healthcare seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much healthcare', 'a good deal of healthcare'.
Suggestion: much healthcare; a good deal of healthcare
..., the youth will not need to receive as many healthcare as the old people; also, they are still...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'problems'' or 'problem's'?
Suggestion: problems'; problem's
...nce needed to understand and solve many problems society faces. This means that young a...
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Line 5, column 738, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion of every person despite their age. To conclude, although senior citizens ca...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun healthcare seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much healthcare', 'a good deal of healthcare'.
Suggestion: much healthcare; a good deal of healthcare
... to any country, as they do not require many healthcare and are still paying taxes to help subs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31952662722 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83462216269 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541420118343 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5480388767 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.454545455 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7272727273 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138024443789 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576260473541 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377703134611 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883802934804 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295440385045 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.