To hold a graduate degree is valued a lot by many people to live a successful life, although other thinks that this is not necessary in present scenario. This situation is very debatable, however I believe a degree holds its importance and should be considered of significant value at the time of recruitment for a particular skilled work.
Graduation or post graduation studies is very much important for everyone, as this will let you select your subject of interest and help you to get in to your field of interest later. Advantage for the degree holders is that, they have practical as well as theoretical knowledge of a subject, which helps them to get a job in their field easily. Ultimately, this leads to job satisfaction, which is of great importance, as happiness at work place leads to success.
On the other hand those who do not have a degree face a problem with limited knowledge of their work. Some even think that experience is better than a degree, though experience is important, but the basic understanding of the concept is necessary too, which can be gained by a university degree. Not having a deeper knowledge of your work would not let you grow in your company, and you will be stuck at one point.
So, in my opinion, I would definitely stand by the idea of having a university degree, as having better understanding of the basics concepts of your field, it will help you to reach your dream job with great success eventually.
- Bringing in foreign workers to fill positions that domestic workers are unwilling to do can cause problems in the local community and should, therefore, be stopped. Do what extent do you agree with this? 56
- You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this. Write a letter to your manager.In your letter• explain why you want to take time off work• give details of the amount of time you need• sugge 64
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views. 61
- Some people think that to lead a successful life a university degree is important. Others believe that this is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter:•describe the work you have been 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73333333333 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77498021371 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552941176471 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.1448717925 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.111111111 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208810231568 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886214081788 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534697463985 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125694164559 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335545783421 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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