Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
Dear Anshika
I’m writing this letter to invite you for my son’s birthday party.
On 7th of April my son is going to be 7. There is a saying “time flies very fast” and actually it is. It was 7 years back when my son came in this world. It is a very precious moment of our life. We want to celebrate this moment and wanna make it memorable. This was the day when abundance of blessings came to us. For the same, we are organising a small birthday party to cherish the moment with our family members and close friends.
We had made some arrangements for cocktail and dinner. Moreover , there are plethora of fun activities for kids. Some of the activities are magic show, tattoo maker, tambola, musical chair and lots of other things of my son’s choice. So don’t forget bring your child with you as he will enjoy a lot.
You are not allowed to give any excuse and this party cannot be completed without your presence.
Anshika you are more than my family for me and shourya need your blessing on this day to lead a good life.
Please be there on time. Looking forward to see you.
Your Lovable
Vandana
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 64, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ements for cocktail and dinner. Moreover , there are plethora of fun activities fo...
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Line 11, column 115, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...e plethora of fun activities for kids. Some of the activities are magic show, tattoo maker...
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Line 11, column 261, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... son's choice. So don't forget bring your child with you as he will enj...
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Line 17, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...need your blessing on this day to lead a good life. Please be there on time. L...
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Line 19, column 42, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...lease be there on time. Looking forward to see you. Your Lovable Vandana ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66504854369 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35762651054 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4269626155 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.5294117647 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1176470588 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88235294118 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168780768711 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522563692514 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699651685403 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100360025346 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062092749909 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.92 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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