You are planning to go on holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter:
1) Why you need a holiday?
2) What your plans are?
3) Why you need your friend to join with you?
Dear Anshika
Its been a long time to see you. Hope everything is going good.
I am writing this letter to ask you to join me on the trip to abroad. Actually since last 2 years i had not been anywhere and now I am tired of my daily routine life though I need some change. I'm in stress and my doctor suggest me to go out somewhere so that psychological state of mind will improve.
So, I'm planning to visit Switzerland and Paris as you already know that's my dream destination and there is plethora of adventure to do. I have made all the arrangements like flight, duration of stay, paragliding, visit to Jungfrau and many more. But i don't have anyone with me so I just thought to write you.
i will be exhilarate if you ready to go with me as your presence will be pleasure for me. you are the most important and childhood friend of mine. These vacations will refresh our old memories.
Looking for positive response and waiting for your revert.
Your Lovable
Vandana
- You are planning to go on holiday in another country. Write a letter to your friend asking him/her to join. Include following in your letter:1)Why you need a holiday?2)What your plans are?3)Why you need your friend to join with you? 56
- Write a letter to your friend inviting him her to your family party In your letter Explain why you are organizing the party Describe what you are planning to do Say how important it is to have your friend at the party 94
- Some believe that those who are not talented in language learning shuld not be required to learn a foriegn language.Do you think school should require students to learn a foriegn language? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...see you. Hope everything is going good. I am writing this letter to ask you to j...
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Line 9, column 99, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to abroad. Actually since last 2 years i had not been anywhere and now I am tire...
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Line 9, column 194, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...routine life though I need some change. Im in stress and my doctor suggest me to g...
^^
Line 13, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...l state of mind will improve. So, Im planning to visit Switzerland and Paris...
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Line 13, column 68, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...itzerland and Paris as you already know thats my dream destination and there is pleth...
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Line 13, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... visit to Jungfrau and many more. But i dont have anyone with me so I just thought t...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
...me so I just thought to write you. i will be exhilarate if you ready to go w...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...me so I just thought to write you. i will be exhilarate if you ready to go w...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53888888889 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51697324598 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3166597456 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8461538462 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288290707255 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937901418992 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734650301977 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125056727125 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346521147047 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.