Dear Selin,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am going to travel India out of season and I would like to ask you if you will visit me.
I have been working hard at hospital for five years and fortunately I will have passed proficiency exam until September. I need to get away articles, patients and exams to relax and unwind. I also like learning new cultures and traditions consequently this break will be a great opportunity for it.
India is one of the world renowed tourist traps due to traditional dishes and garments. I am planning to purchase some hand made Indian clothes and consume tasty chicken curry there. I also would like to visit innumerable ancient temples which have breathtaking views.
You have been there many times consequently I would argue that you know the most convenient and the cheapest accommodation there given the fact that I browsed on the internet and discovered that it will cost an arm and a leg. Further and more importantly, you did your master degree on Indian politics thus you will be a great travel guide for me. Moreover, if you join with me, you will eat your favourite fried meat with vegetables from the best chef there. I hope you will have joined me. If you can arrange it, it will be over the moon.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes
Mary
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ike to ask you if you will visit me. I have been working hard at hospital for ...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...assed proficiency exam until September. I need to get away articles, patients and...
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Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...patients and exams to relax and unwind. I also like learning new cultures and tra...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, thus, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1090.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63829787234 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48437033693 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2043358523 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6666666667 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267332690368 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902809166151 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844940237774 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134755242376 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107849227769 0.0580467560999 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.