Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my satisfaction with the service I received on 23rd of June,2018.
First of all, I had puchased two tickets to watch "Freedom" play at your theater. I had to leave office later than expected consequently I was in hurry to be on time there. Unfortunatelly, I hit two vehicles when I was at parking space which is near theater.
Secondly, drivers were very angry as there were several damages on their cars. Fortunately, workers of theater were there. They made them calm down and called policemen in order to report accident. If they had not been there, this phenomenon would have been exacerbated. While we were watching it, they stay there until all legal issues were completed.
Finally, If there had been more parking spaces, I would not have involved an accident that day. New parking spaces could be provided to prevent similar incidents in the near future. I hope this suggestion will be discussed propmptly.
Thank you for your attention.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2018'.
Suggestion: June 2018
... with the service I received on 23rd of June,2018. First of all, I had puchased two ti...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...they had not been there, this phenomenon would have been exacerbated. While we we...
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Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ention. Yours faithfully, Mary Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04597701149 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88844422729 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718390804598 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1594406274 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.7142857143 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4285714286 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14092845588 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463828972815 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410292922095 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752150671858 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456018044467 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.12 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.