Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals. Do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
human instincts for expanding urban cities is becoming faster than last decades.
According to some, developing human’s needs have more priorities than preserving animals that are in danger. In my opinion I disagree that faunas should be like victims for developing human’s population and industries as it has catastrophic disadvantages for the earth.
A good reason for ceasing to colonize lands for human benefits is that the lands will gradually destroy. In the other word the ecosystem will be disrupted and all the vegetation and natural resources will entirely vanish. So it will be a serious and chronic threat for human survival.
Another point to consider is that not allocating lands for endangered animals cause that animals already will lost their natural wild life habitat. Furthermore, To surviving from lack of foods, wild animals migrate to urban or rural parts and searching for portion of foods which are in rubbish and infected areas. Consequently there will be more infections that will cause many serious deceases if a animal bite a person.
Finally, destroying jungles and environment will have serious backwards because animals will extinct, for example, by falling trees many rabbits and small animals will vanish and some wild animals like wolves may starving from lack of enough foods. In other word, the ecological balance will be collapse and the fauna will be destroyed.
To conclude, eradicating lands is a serious trouble which costs Irreparable damages to The earth and I disagree to shape every component in the earth for human developments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
human instincts for expanding urban cities is...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...animals cause that animals already will lost their natural wild life habitat. Furthe...
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Line 13, column 316, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...hich are in rubbish and infected areas. Consequently there will be more infections that will...
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Line 13, column 400, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hat will cause many serious deceases if a animal bite a person. Finally, des...
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Line 17, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cause animals will extinct, for example, by falling trees many rabbits and small ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40079365079 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74848500379 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5616198955 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172326494277 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817156209712 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597158356216 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107681163639 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480302994522 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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