You have recently ordered an item from the internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter
Describe what you purchased
Explain why you are not happy with the purchase
Tell them what you would like them to do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the recorder, which I bought at your online store on the Shoope in 27th of September 2019. The code of the product is AB12345.
After one week, I received this recorder but you can imagine how unhappy I was to discover that I can not press the button "play" because it was so hard. I contacted with your representatives tackle my problem by changing a new recorder for me but unfortunately, he denied with my require.
I also contacted with you by phone but no one offered me any sensible answers. I would like you look into that matter as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully.
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...no one offered me any sensible answers. I would like you look into that matter as...
^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nto that matter as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...that matter as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you. ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 608.0 937.175257732 65% => OK
No of words: 126.0 206.0 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8253968254 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96715029137 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 180.9 290.88556701 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6530705445 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8571428571 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214354965207 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826876091495 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637447374442 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138271531474 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600480657763 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.