Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by the local farmers. Would the advantages of

During the bygone days, people used to eat their local food. However, now trend has been changed totally. Due to globalization there are so many eatable things which are exported from others nations. Some individuals assert that it has a great impact on economy as well as environment if they utilize them. i feel that there are more demerits of this notion than merits.

To embark with, the positives of having foreign food. First of all, masses get to know about the taste of other nation if they have foreign meal it help to make them comfortable if sometime they visit that particular country where that food belongs. secondly, import and export help to make good relation with other nations which leads to peace in the world. For instance if there will be healthy relation among the overseas then there will be no chance of war among them. Finally, humans will get to know about the fruits as well as vegetables which are come from out side of the state with the help of this they can familiar with the taste of them and they can explore about the fruit items more.

on the flip side there are more disadvantages than advantages of consuming food which comes from out side. As, there are so many farmers which work very hard but they do not earn more money just because of food import from out side countries. As a result, they have poor condition even they have to suffer to fulfill their daily needs. Moreover, there are so many products which are imported they are packed with so many chemicals to keep the fresh so it can be cause of so many health problems. Besides this, it has very negative impact on environment also because there are number of items which are imported from airplanes which produce air pollution due to it many problems take place which are harmful for human being and birds also.

Hammering the nail, I personally believe that there are more cons than pros of using exported products. people should have local food more so that they can spent money on their native product which leads to strong economy of the nation.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, i feel, as a result, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63835616438 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15507622539 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517808219178 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9222767604 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151892218433 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568487158193 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060636030102 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1102387793 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03693852425 0.056905535591 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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