"High-speed electronic communications media, such as electronic mail and television, tend to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication.
Now a days television and electronic mail become essential part of our daily life as a high speed electronic communication media.I am agree with the statement that these type of high speed electronic media tending to prevent meaningful and thoughtful communication.
In office electronic mailing is a daily part of our duties.Office employees mail their clients for business purpose and these mails bear significantly thoughtful.As example when office employees mail their clients they checked several times before sending as companies profit depends on that deal.So Electronic mail prevent thoughtful communication.
Television is a very essential part of our daily life.Television contains varieties types of program.Sometimes these news are really have important news for nations.As example recently in Dhaka city Dengue fever has become epidemic.From television people would aware about the symptoms of that sickness.By this way this awareness are reaching to countries people very fastly within a seconds.
In our country village people are really unknown to some issues.They have very little knowledge about anything but now village people are getting improved their knowkledge by televisions.As example television giving then recently news of the medical issues. From that they become about their health issues and maintain their life with healthy food.
However every thing has advantages besides having little advantages also.Television has some contents that are not healthy for children.Television is a open platform so they provide different topic covered by every issues.parents should keep watching on their children when their children watchy some specific program.
Finally, we can come to the conclusion that electronic mail and television both are very essential part of our daily life and are bearing meaningful and thoughtful communication with people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, really, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88768115942 5.05705443957 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14571218422 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4215471777 60.3974514979 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 232.142857143 118.986275619 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.4285714286 23.4991977007 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 5.21951772744 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248272671054 0.243740707755 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1387101498 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194218082804 0.0758088955206 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1618285081 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200664475022 0.0667264976115 301% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.0 14.1392134831 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 14.97 48.8420337079 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.9 12.1743820225 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.1639044944 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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