The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a company that builds shopping malls throughout the country.
"The surface of a section of Route 101, paved two years ago by McAdam Road Builders, is
now badly cracked and marred by dangerous potholes. In another part of the state, a section
of Route 66, paved by Appian Roadways more than four years ago, is still in good condition.
Appian Roadways has recently purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery, and it has hired a new quality-control manager. Because of its superior work and commitment to quality, weshould contract with Appian Roadways rather than McAdam Road Builders to construct the access roads for all our new shopping malls."
To get rid of from cracked and marred by dangerous potholes in the surface of a section of Route 101, vice president recommends that we should contract with Appian Roadways rather than McAdam Road Builders to construct the access roads for all our new shopping malls.To support the recommendation author claimed that a section of route 66 paved by Appian Roadways still in good condition. Moreover author claimed that Appian roadways recently purchased state of the art paving machinery and hired new quality control manager.Furthermore author added Appian roadways are superior in work and committed to qualities.Here author failed to represent cogent logic and has not solved some important issues to support his recommendation.
Firstly, author claimed that the surface of a section of route 101 paved by McAdam Road Builders is badly cracked and marred by dangerous potholes.As the road is paved two years ago, author mentioned about at present condition but have not make clarify about past condition of the road.Consequently it may happen that McAdam Road Builder worked diligently and committed good qualities to clients but due to access heavy load vehicles on the surface of the route 101, the road surface become in bad condition.Without confirmation we can not rely on that the support provided by McAdam Road Builder is not up to mark.
Secondly, author recommend that the route 66 pavd by Appian Roadways still in god condition.As the road is paved more than four years ago. author have not shown any reliable data sample of the road condition in previous days. It may happen that in previous years roads surface were cracked and badly need repair.After repairing it is at present in good condition.Without any reliable sample data we can not believe that the road was build by Appian roadways was good in previous years.
Thirdly, Author also added that Appian Roadways has recently purchased state-of-the-art paving machinery, and it has hired anew quality-control manager.They are superior in work and commit qualities to client.But here author have not clarified the reason behind purchasing a machinery tools and new quality control manager.It may happen that the previous machinery tool was not that much standard in working output .And also in previously working quality control manager was not diligent and skilled in working.So without proper evaluation we can not claim that Appian Roadways provide good qualities.
Finally, without proper clarification we can not claim that we should contract with Appian Roadways rather than McAdam Road Builders to construct the access roads for all our new shopping malls.To support proposed recommendation we must need to know proper reviews and reliable confirmation scenario.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 450 350
No. of Characters: 2269 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.606 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.042 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.553 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 185 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 130 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 82 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 50 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.276 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.889 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.501 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.771 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.28 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: To
...ss roads for all our new shopping malls.To support the recommendation author claim...
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...ppian Roadways still in good condition. Moreover author claimed that Appian roadways rec...
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...rior in work and committed to qualities.Here author failed to represent cogent logic...
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...t issues to support his recommendation. Firstly, author claimed that the surface...
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...racked and marred by dangerous potholes.As the road is paved two years ago, author...
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...about at present condition but have not make clarify about past condition of the roa...
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...larify about past condition of the road.Consequently it may happen that McAdam Road Builder ...
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... Appian Roadways still in god condition.As the road is paved more than four years ...
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... Appian Roadways still in god condition.As the road is paved more than four years ...
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...face were cracked and badly need repair.After repairing it is at present in good cond...
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...t that much standard in working output .And also in previously working quality cont...
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...was not diligent and skilled in working.So without proper evaluation we can not cl...
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Suggestion: To
...ss roads for all our new shopping malls.To support proposed recommendation we must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 55.5748502994 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2328.0 2260.96107784 103% => OK
No of words: 435.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35172413793 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94138267912 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 204.123752495 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422988505747 0.468620217663 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 705.55239521 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.67365269461 179% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 19.7664670659 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.8473053892 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 180.112464866 57.8364921388 311% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 291.0 119.503703932 244% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.375 23.324526521 233% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.625 5.70786347227 274% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211887529042 0.218282227539 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110717245506 0.0743258471296 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102439712757 0.0701772020484 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132274465956 0.128457276422 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980536492633 0.0628817314937 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 14.3799401198 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 48.3550499002 34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.197005988 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.64 12.5979740519 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32208582834 116% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 98.500998004 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 12.3882235529 222% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 11.1389221557 212% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 11.9071856287 202% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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