The bar chart below shows Scotland’s exports to the rest of the UK and the rest of the world for the year 2014.
The bar chart illustrates that Scotland’s was exporting in different industries of the UK and other countries for the year of 2014.
Overall, it is clearly seen that the imported products were sold more in the rest of the world with compared to the UK in the in the industry of business services and finance, Hotels and restaurant services and the most less products were imported to industrial company of UK in the field of agricultural , Forestry, fishing and mining.
Moreover, the graph shows the second largest imported business in other parts of the world is chemicals and minerals. But in UK the secondary imported business products were manufacturing of food and drink. After that, the significant changes in the business demand is seen in business service and finance, Hotels and restaurant service.
Furthermore, products were exported by 13.8 billion in other countries where in UK dealt with 1.7 billion in the field of business service and finance. The less difference is seen in the manufacturing of food and Drink products where UK earned 4.4 billion and other rest of the worlds earned 5.8 billion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in the'.
Suggestion: in the
...st of the world with compared to the UK in the in the industry of business services and finan...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'less' (without 'most') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: less
... Hotels and restaurant services and the most less products were imported to industrial co...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun products is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ls and restaurant services and the most less products were imported to industrial co...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mpany of UK in the field of agricultural , Forestry, fishing and mining. Mor...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tries where in UK dealt with 1.7 billion in the field of business service and fin...
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Line 9, column 307, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... rest of the worlds earned 5.8 billion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14594594595 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83317009997 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464864864865 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.2153371247 43.030603864 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238699847785 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119336555438 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125976323419 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174633573496 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139245881802 0.0819641961636 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.