With the emerge of technology people nowadays incorporated various modes of communication such as electronic mails and telephones, consequently that makes them less sociable. I definitely agree with this viewpoint as it inculcates anti-social behavior along with an increase in relationship barriers between individuals.
The fast-paced world has become over-reliant on technology even for day to day communication thus instills hostile behavior in them. Moreover, instead of personally visiting or greeting, people take resort of technology by calling them or sending an email that lacks personal touch. for instance, in past decades people used to send letters to their friends, relatives in their own handwriting that contains an emotional value for the sender as well as for receiver but nowadays it becomes a large trend to send an electronic mail for wishing birthdays, congratulating for success that however lacks a personal touch and feels.
Another negative impact of the above-said trend is exorbitant increase in long-distance relationships in few years ; with regard to this context rather than personally attending ceremonies such as weddings functions ,social gatherings,meetings people use social media such as WhatsApp, Instagram, and Skype for video calling and sending messages that create a personal barrier between them. for example, a friend of mine marks her presence in her sister birthday celebration by a video call. To add to it, easy availability and vast affordability of communication modes people refrain from visiting or socializing with other people.
To summarize, though advancement in technology has made communication easy but also abstain people from socializing. while it creates a virtual fence in relationships, therefore, people grasped unsociable tendencies and become unfriendly.
- Homework is a part of school life Many people feel that giving homework daily to school children works well for them while some feel it is an unnecessary burden on them What do you think about it 89
- Smoking not only harms the smoker, but also those who are nearby. Therefore, smoking should be banned in public places. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some people think that because of email and telephones, communication among people is less personal now, then it used to be. Do you agree or disagree with that view ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your view. 73
- Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports. Others believe that hard work and practice is more important. Discuss both sides and add your own opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
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Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , meetings
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, sort of, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28514848096 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.5741073722 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.6 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.4 7.06120827912 232% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172184507223 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072046722177 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400712467131 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109221041614 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211469637256 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.66 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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