A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir,
Concerning your question regarding sponsoring either the sports for two years or two concerts. however, in my opinion, both are beneficial at distinctive levels.
On the first hand, nowadays football becoming more and more popular in our area and our area team because of the scarcity of funds unable to participate at the state level championship. however, you can spend or allocate some funds for them to participate. Alternatively, you can spend money to introduce sports club for indoor games or football foundation for lifetime benefits significantly.
On the other hand, concerts are also beneficial in terms of screening promotions on televisions. Broadcasting concert on-air would benefit you to promote to the people outside our area.
Organise one concert instead of two, for the sake of entertainment and spend the rest of the money for introducing sports club or football foundation for one year in our area.
Yours Faithfully,
Moses Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Concerning your question regarding spons...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...e sports for two years or two concerts. however, in my opinion, both are beneficial at ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...cipate at the state level championship. however, you can spend or allocate some funds f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, regarding, so, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37908496732 4.54256449028 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98967994403 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607843137255 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1294550607 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29809277003 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114677303737 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11178777109 0.0603063233224 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184014029801 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947013309976 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 8.71597938144 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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