It is sometimes argued that the aims of companies includes not only making money, but also social responsibilities. While there are several reasons why some people are in favor of the idea, I mostly disagree with it.
When discussing why businesses are supposed to be responsible for the society, different aspects of factors will be mentioned. According to an economic concept - social cost, which means the total cost resulting from a transaction or an activity, the goods or services produced by companies result in individual cost as well as external cost. To be precious, when a shoe factory produces shoes, we should consider not only the obvious cost, such as the price of leather, employers’ salary, rental of land and other expenses, but also the water and air pollution caused by the process of production.
Nonetheless, the negative points of pushing commercial organizations to take social responsibilities should to be taken seriously. Firstly, all the companies have already taken actions for their social responsibilities. They offer the possibilities of jobs for residents and pay taxes to government, which provide citizens with public services and increase the burden on them at the same time. Secondly, with the strong competitiveness at the modern business environment, each business have to stay focused on the most important thing - making profits - to prevent themselves from bankrupt. Luckily, companies have other solutions to make our world better, such as donating money to non-government organizations, especially charity institutions. For example, as we all known, although Bill Gates set up one of the most successful company in the world, Microsoft, he haven’t let Microsoft to be responsible for the society. He chose to start the Gates Foundation to cope with the serious problems human beings faces in the developing countries and regions like Africa and Asia.
After discussing the most pertinent points of this issue, I’m convinced that while companies should concentrate their energy on improving their products and services, they could contribute to letting other professional organization to do the charity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49101796407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14972828086 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634730538922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0391169703 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.076923077 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6923076923 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195323889024 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699954917355 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778793137181 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11397105848 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761249722993 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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